Blue Steel El Mago. *NPAC Nominee Oct. '03*
Blue Steel El Mago. Blue steel El Mago, on my temple cool, drawing thoughts, my life, an inkless collage...Read More
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Whoa! .......you have a *fantastic* way with words dear..the last stanza made me catch my breath!..awesome work!.. Raven
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Very interesting read. S. Shadow, think that the broken lines works very well in this- very well done, much enjoyed.Po The wolf howled under the leavesAnd spit out the prettiest flowersof his meal of...
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*excellent* closing line, BG...images to conjure with indeed! Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom...
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hmmm ... one to think on, bg ... it evokes a *very* disturbing image for me ... and left me quite unsettled ... cool on the temple, but hot within ... very powerful writing ... that's some talent...
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Very good, BG, much enjoyed, especially since much of it is shrouded in mystery for me! It seems cool in all senses. Davie
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very nice poem, puts me in a mood for traveling for some reason.
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Though I find it disturbing, (because I too have guns) this is nonetheless a very powerful write.CB
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A powerful image that gives me shivers up my spine. Great writing.Suzanne
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Dear Brendan,Cold as steel yet wrought with truth. I greatly enjoyed this marvellous poem.Congratulations on a well-deserved nomination!Best Wishes,Thespianna Water flows over these hands. May I use...
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Don't stop breathing on my account dear lol, a million thanks Ravvvvvven for such a lovely reply, BG
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Many thanks ,Souls, I usually start a piece with a last line, BG
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Kind words, Beth, I thank you, and yes, the piece is of a slightly disturbing nature, BG
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Many thanks Davie, much appreciated, BG
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Cheers Blue, I suppose it is about travelling, thank you again my dear, BG
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Thank you kindly Suzanne, hope you enjoyed your shiver lol, BG
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Kind as always, I thank you muchly Thespiana, BG
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